Lest We Forget

Back when I was starting LOSTINE, back when Koz and the Narrator were just a couple

of chapters into Coffin Marsh, and they had found a kid’s amputated finger in that

swamp, because I knew right then LOSTINE was going to be a serious work, I gave the

Narrator and Koz skills – skills taught them by Koz’s uncle – a combat Marine. There

 was a language that went with Marine-hood in the 1960s; it was the language of jungle

fighting inVietnam.

 

In LOSTINE, I had two 6th-Grade boys “facing real dangers”, as the Narrator put it. I

had to make the reader believe middle-schoolers could do what they did – and make

those boys believe it themselves – just as they believed they understood what a Marine

does.

 

Early on, as LOSTINE was first read to an Oregon writers’ group called Tuesday,  a man

in the group exclaimed in irritation, “This is about Vietnam!” I never thought that.

I did see LOSTINE as Vietnam-flavored; it fit the nature of a swamp. I wanted  readers to

be able to taste the same lurking, silent dangers those boys knew Koz’s uncle and dad had

faced.

 

But I found out, after that objection during a Tuesday session, that I reveled in adding

every bit of Vietnamesque I could sift into the brew as LOSTINE started to bubble. No

politics. Writing LOSTINE, I found myself wanting to commemorate the Vietnam

experience Americans in the field had undergone – the disorientation – the creeping,

often overwhelming anxiety.

Joe Smolen

Joe C. Smolen, AKA L.W. Smolen is an Oregon Coast writer of insufficiently exaggerated notoriety. Never having been arrested, he lives with his wife Sherrie and the ghost of their black, Standard Poodle Rico Suave in a really pretty good, Prairie Style house they built themselves. Since the Literary Magazine Fleas on the Dog of Kitchener, Ontario has permanently stopped accepting submissions, in order to read L.W. Smolen’s 2021 short fiction, A Real Guy, you are referred to joecsmolen.com. Some of L.W’s other, subsequent short fictions are archived at Olive Tree Review, Ginosko, Cardinal Sins Journal, Wrath Bearing Tree, Wilderness House and etc. Kirkus reviews once interpreted his work favorably.

https://joecsmolen.com
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